I think this is really good! I love this artwork! I've never written a critique before so I don't know if I'm even doing this right....
But I see that you need a title for this...
so I suggest:
well I don't really know if I helped you or not but I hope I was helpful in some way. ^^
I don't know P!nk so I'm sorry... this may not be in any use but at least I tried right???
Well Good look with your title! I hope you come up with a great title or... maybe even use mine.. ( just maybe)
Well good LUcK!!! ^^